|Reviews for The Online Chronicles|
| helixdown 3/9/08 . chapter 1
I'm sorry, i couldn't understand this, at all
| Jill 1/31/08 . chapter 4
Oh good god. XD I swear, I laugh harder everytime.
| Jill 1/30/08 . chapter 3
This is some funny shit.
| Jill 1/30/08 . chapter 2
Fitty XD. Oh shit.
| Jill 1/30/08 . chapter 1
XD I couldn't understand half of it but nice.
| The Mr. Hamtaro 1/20/08 . chapter 5
Ah, a quality review, brought to you by one of the actual characters of this story!
Interesting, if I do say so myself.
Chapter 5 was one of, if not, the funniest in my opinion, not only because I played a major part in it (it would have been just as funny if not just a tiny bit less without me), but because the humor in it reflected upon today's society, and how today's youth can realize how stupid and obvious advertisements have gotten. This story opened my eyes, Mr. Berserko, and I don't care if it was a giant metaphor for "I don't give a crap about starving orphans in Africa."
Under this "Submit Review" button, there are words telling me what to do. It's telling me to help you improve. What an asshole. If anything, this story needs moar mudkipz, but I wouldn't really recommend that, seeing as how Mudkipz don't really apply to the youth of this day an age.
-The Mr. Hamtaro
| QuietRomance 1/10/08 . chapter 3
So... That was the fucking funniest shit I think ever.
In case you didn't tell while we were on the phone... I almost pissed myself. XD