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| Twilight Starr 2008-06-27 ch 1,  | abuseGreat job at expressing feelings. It makes me feel sorry for the main character. Nice work. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| mizu no kokoro 2008-01-11 ch 1, | abusecheating is... lack of morals, or perhaps judgement? i like how you put your emotions into this keep writing |
| OMG it's WickedJelly 2008-01-10 ch 1, | abuseVery, very nice. The short and simple sentences fit the piece well. |