wow.

that was great. i particularly loved the ending. i do that a lot to myself [rehearse lines and end up not saying what i practiced in the end, that is] so I really liked this.

It was left hanging, and though I totally want to know how the best friend feels, I think you ended it perfectly :)

Good ending.

oh wow. that was one of the best one shots ive ever read! keep up the good work with your writing :)

I really must say, this is genius. Better then anything i ever wrote and definately better then i've ever seen in books

It's good. I usually hate story that left me hanging, but somehow her (i assumd that the speaker is a lady) rants are so vivid, that when she startd it took as simple as 'hi'. Um i still hate the left hanging part, i mean the point of reading a tale is about gve clarity. But thats another story lol.

It's good. I usually hate story that left me hanging, but somehow her (i assumd that the speaker is a lady) rants are so vivid, that when she startd it took as simple as 'hi'. Um i still hate the left hanging part, i mean the point of reading a tale is about gve clarity. But thats another story lol.

I loved this, and the way you ended it was perfect, even though I totally want to know what happens. :)

Sally

I love your writing style!

And the way you just left me guessing at the end.. like, you left it up to us readers on how it really ends.

Wow, you're amazing!

ugg. i want to hear more. i want the whole conversation. i know it doesn't fit with this glimse. i know that its not really about the conversation at all, or the outcome. But GRR! this is a really good peice of writing. I just finished up to where you've updated on Breaking Brian Deacon, and i must admit, i am addicted to your writing. thanx, and please, keep it up

Awesome. I love how she has imaginary conversations with herself/Michael, but she eventually ends up with simplest. And the "I love you"s made my heart wrench and my optimism to wish for an uderstanding best friend who loved her back. :)

GREATNESS!

-toffeecakesxox.

GAH! does he love her?

You never seize to amaze me, wow...

This is honest...

The fears the anger that NEVER seems to come out in real words unless is either convenient or a mistake...

The sighs and deep breath we need to take and how our tummy feels... The tiny voice in the back of our mind...

This is real life put into words, and that happens to be the best kind of reading material...

MG

AW haha. But seriously, this was adorable. I'm dying to know what he has to say (although I guess that's part of the mystery).

That was cruel! Hahaha! I wanted to read more. :) Oh well. But it was a great one-shot, nonetheless.

This is sweet. I really want to know what he says, though.