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| Twilight Starr 2008-07-03 ch 1,  | abuseGood story. The title makes me laugh. Nice work. Keep writing! ~Twilight Starr~ |
| friend 49 2008-07-03 ch 1, | abuseAwh I love this! I think you're an excellent one-shot writer (and in general, too), even though you said you don't write them very often. Good job! |
| rachely 2008-06-07 ch 1, | abusei liked a lot. :) and no problem..i'm glad that you and your friend are working on rebuilding things. |
| AnyMousse 2008-06-06 ch 1, | abuseVery good story. It was written very well and pulled me in. I was bummed to see it ended; I wanted it to go on for at least another chapter. But again, very good writing; keep up the good work. |
| centenarian 2008-05-30 ch 1, | abuseWell, I guess you just want us to imagine what happened in the end. Each to his own. Well, I've come across two stories of yours where they guy is avoiding the girl with no apparent reason. Just..."I'm busy". Now that's confusing. I guess you also want us to make up our own reasons for the guy's attitude. But nevertheless, it was nice, a bit saddening and all but still pleasant. |
| d666lisa 2008-04-25 ch 1, | abuseExcellent story, beautifully written :) |
| x3life 2008-04-24 ch 1, | abuseaww this was really good =) |
| Norel 2008-04-11 ch 1, | abuseThis was really good. I loved the way she was talking to herself in the car; it was funny and made her more real to me. But, I have to admit that I'm interested to see what happens next. Why was Michael avoiding her? Does he love her? I'd like to see a second chapter to this, but I still liked where you stopped even if you don't add anything |
| D-Mish 2008-04-03 ch 1, | abusei want this continued. argh. what a good story starter it is. |
| slightlyaddictedx3 2008-03-30 ch 1, | abuseveryy god;] |
| luv me like no other 2008-03-30 ch 1, | abuseThis is such an adorable piece. |
| admit it.you luv me 2008-03-25 ch 1, | abuse>_< This is a sad stry |
| gulistanlik 2008-03-18 ch 1, | abuseOh wow! My romantic side wanted the fic to go on,possibly some more mushy parts included. But I'm glad you stopped where you did. It is very fitting indeed. I have one-sided conversations when I'm pissed off, too, but after the actual confrontation has occurred. Yeah. Keep up the good work! Can't wait for some updates on your other fics! =D gulistanlik |
| Cupid's Jinx 2008-02-13 ch 1, | abuseI've done that. Had conversations with myself, I mean. I was in Chemistry yesterday, and a guy who was sat next to me went 'Laura, are you talking to yourself?', to which my best friend said 'Again, Jinxie? Ya know, I *am* here for you.' He he Love it -x- |
| alidy 2008-01-26 ch 1, | abuseI have one-sided conversations to myself all the time, and I laughed a bit when I read this. Anyway, that was one of the sweetest, cutest things I've ever read. I love how you got me feeling with the main character, and I admit my gut clenched a bit at the end. It was a good ending, by the way. I love it when stories finish like that, and you don't know how it progresses and what its outcome is. Good stuff. |