Ok. Whoa. The middle two stanzas were amazing! The fourth one was a bit cliché; the first was also stunning (only it didn't remind me of him as much, lol.)

faves.. by the way, thanks for adding me on your fave authors' list ;)

Well done. I'm left wanting to know why "he can never know"? You have an excellent command of adjetives. Write on!

oh my god, it's breathtakingly beautiful.
seriously, you sicken me with your talent.

i love it, very sweet :]

((favorited))

~deeanna