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| Needa S 2008-04-03 ch 1, | It sort of reminds me of a painting. Great rhymes, well written as well. Keep'em coming. |
| Anaare 2008-01-28 ch 1, | First of all, many thanks for the review. Then, the poem. I found this to have an interesting format with a good rhythm to it. I think it's well-worded, although I do agree with the previous reviewer. Why did you chose to write certain words with capital letters? Is there a certain reason? Anyway, a wonderfully spiritual poem. Much enjoyed reading it. |
| Princess-anna57 2008-01-10 ch 1, | O_O The capital letters are hurting my eyes, lol! But this is definately well written. Write on. ~Anna~ ^_^ |