Reviews for Caught In Fowl Territory

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Sister Bluebird 2008-07-09 ch 28,	abuseYou did a fantastic job with this story and I'll definitely be adding it to my favorites. I especially loved visiting your site and discovering that Ryan Theriot was your inspiration for Troy--he's one of my favorite players. :)
Allison Smith 2008-07-08 ch 22,	abuseUgh, Prednisone... it always tastes disgusting, no matter how much you prepare yourself for it. :( It's what my doctor prescribes me with every year when my asthma turns into full-blown Pneumonia. yuck.
Haley Hardcore 2008-07-03 ch 28,	abuseahh awesome story i loved it:)
Songorita 2008-06-26 ch 28,	abuseGreat story, loved it.
Amora Lee 2008-06-07 ch 28,	abuseThat was so sweet. I LOVED IT!
Jen 2008-05-28 ch 28, anon.	abuseHey, I really liked your story, but one thing about the title has been bugging me. I know it's a baseball story, and I think you are trying to use a baseball term in the title; however, the word "fowl" has to do with birds. The word "foul" is the one that has to do with baseball (and other things, like odors or moods.) Pesky homonyms! Anyways, if "fowl" is how you meant the title to be or if someone else already brought it up, please forgive me. I really did like the story. It was cute and fluffy but also had some good topics brought up. Do we have to forgive people just because they're family? Excellent question.
Genato 2008-04-20 ch 28,	abuselol. you're obsessed with baseball, girl. cute. your writing has somehwat improved... but. the epilogue is too soon. but it's okay. :)
CoopersGirl 2008-04-18 ch 28,	abuseI'd been meaning to get to the bookstore for awhile and get something to read. Being the poor university student that I am, right now I can't step foot in a bookstore! I've read and loved so many of your other stories, so when I saw this one, one I hadn't read I got excited. And this was EXACTLY what I needed. It was absolutely perfect!! I loved it. You're a wonderful writer!
Kath-JM 2008-04-17 ch 28,	abuseYou should write a sequel. I completely fell in love with this story and the characters and would love to see a continuation. Just a suggestion teehee.
Dark Matter Effect 2008-04-15 ch 1,	abuse"...where perspective people spoke with representatives..." 'Perspective' should be 'prospective.' "little to no respect of the creatures with which they shared the Earth..." 'Respect of' should be 'respect for.' Also, Indianapolis doesn't have a major league baseball team, but I'm sure you're aware of that and that's why you chose it for your setting. :) Not bad overall. I'll keep reading.
Freakage 2008-03-30 ch 28,	abuseAw, this is so sweet! Animals and love, the perfect mix (but not in a creepy sense, of course). Thanks for writing!
CarlyJo 2008-03-17 ch 28,	abuseSpanky the little stinker. Totally a match maker. I loved the story!! Excellent job! I can't wait to read Jess's story, I was actually thinking of requesting one, but now I don't have too! ~Carly =:3 )
Megan McDonald 2008-03-15 ch 1, anon.	abuseI really enjoy all of your stories! I like that they all have some mystery mixed in with the romance. And you post really quickly so I don't have to wait a couple weeks like I have to with some authors. Keep writing!
hi 2008-03-14 ch 22, anon.	abusethis is so much like the crucible its not even funny. I am half expecting someone to be crushed by a huge cement block. That being said, i am absolutely loving this story. Perhaps you should write this in play version and make mass millions off it (chuckles)
Shelley 2008-03-10 ch 28, anon.	abuseI LOVED IT!!

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