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Reviews For: The Last of the Toothpaste

simpleplan13
2008-03-09
ch 1,
abuselol... this was really funny and cute.. I like the personification and how other than the title you never use the word toothpaste.. calling it "liquidized mint" was a great description

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fatbird33
2008-01-28
ch 1,
abusehe he how 'bout some mints. or gum is awlays a good solution.
IdeasInTheAir
2008-01-10
ch 1,
abuse*shakes head* What a tragedy. The ending wasn't the best, but the rest was cool. Smiles for you
Danielle=)
Random Word Artist
2008-01-10
ch 1,
abuseOkay...
Interesting...
Blissfully Sarcastic
2008-01-10
ch 1,
abuseDon't much like the ending, because it isn't that much of an ending, but it made me laugh, and that gets you brownie points.
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