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| simpleplan13 2008-03-09 ch 1, | abuselol... this was really funny and cute.. I like the personification and how other than the title you never use the word toothpaste.. calling it "liquidized mint" was a great description PS If your bored check out the Review Game and its Review Marathon (links in my profile) |
| fatbird33 2008-01-28 ch 1, | abusehe he how 'bout some mints. or gum is awlays a good solution. |
| IdeasInTheAir 2008-01-10 ch 1, | abuse*shakes head* What a tragedy. The ending wasn't the best, but the rest was cool. Smiles for you Danielle=) |
| Random Word Artist 2008-01-10 ch 1, | abuseOkay... Interesting... |
| Blissfully Sarcastic 2008-01-10 ch 1, | abuseDon't much like the ending, because it isn't that much of an ending, but it made me laugh, and that gets you brownie points. |