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Beyond-the-Shadows
2008-05-26
ch 1,
abuseHAHA lol I like this :D
HarderToBreathe...
2008-05-24
ch 1, anon.
abuseI've been eying this one-shot for a long time now. I never got around to reading it until this hour of the night.

At first I was worried on how it will end. An interesting one-shot! really it was very original. Mind games are always fun! haha!
starcrossedvoyager
2008-05-21
ch 1,
abuseaw, it's so cute...
LeticiaTokioHotel
2008-05-18
ch 1,
abuseHahaha! awesome one-shot.
Masquerade Beauty
2008-05-14
ch 1,
abuseAw that was sure a very sweet oneshot. You're a really great writer, especially since on fictionpress you need to make up your own fiction and introduce characters without confusing the reader. Your oneshot was perfect.

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xXx.sWeeT.ILluSionS.xXx
2008-05-14
ch 1,
abuseI loved the idea of all the phobias! The mushroom outburst was a spectaculor way in which to start the one shot. Tinsley tricked him - I was definately surprised, even though I guessed that something was up as she didn't seem that afraid of getting naked.

Loved this! You so have to right more.
Angel of Ink
2008-05-01
ch 1,
abusehahahaha. I thought she might be lying... awesome. What a way to be told, right? :P
CATpuccino.
2008-04-23
ch 1,
abuselol. CUTE! more oneshots please? ;P
luv me like no other
2008-04-04
ch 1,
abuseWHOA! what a cute oneshot of phobias. i absolutely love the ending!
Nina
2008-03-16
ch 1, anon.
abusenice story ! :D
very original and funny :)
under the bed
2008-03-14
ch 1,
abuse=] Good one. Evidently, she didn't have ablutophobia.
found.eventually
2008-03-04
ch 1,
abuseSHE TRICKED HIM! AND ME! What the hell. I KNEW something was wrong. I just KNEW. Gasp. I've been fooled!

And now I can't seem to stop laughing, sighing and cooing at the same time. Congratulations, your story (which is awesome, by the way) has turned me into a babbling, hopeless romantic. Not that I was ever far from that.
Aloloo
2008-02-23
ch 1,
abuseThis was such a cute oneshot. If you turned it into a story, I would most definatly read it.
xLittleBlackConverse.
2008-02-20
ch 1,
abuseaww this is so freakin cute!! and the whole phobia is very original...did i mention that i love yr style of writing? oh well i do..its really..witty and quirky and stuff lol
me like :)
xo's.
TwinkleHeart
2008-02-19
ch 1,
abusehaaha amusingg
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