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| Lonely Hope 2008-01-12 ch 1,  | abuseGood job! I think this is a great story, you have great grammar, it's a great short story, and you can really sympathize to it. Everyone has their own little haven where we like to retreat and get away from the world. I think you did a good job on this and it's an inspiring story. I wonder if it has any history behind it... |
| Microsuede Mouse 2008-01-11 ch 1, | abuse^-^ Cute! Well written, too. |
| hypa to hell and back 2008-01-10 ch 1, | abuseaww that so sweet really it is i like it really i do i think its fantastically put and there is nothing that you would have to improve good |