Yes! I loved it (: those two are so adorable together.
Great chapter!

I liked it (: not my favorite chapter but still very contributive to the story.

I can't wait for more Kristen/Calvin action! Will there be more of that soon?

I was in a super hurry a few days ago and forgot to review this when I read it! Silly me!

Anyway, I thought the opening part was very cute because, for whatever reason, the odea of the others having a bet going on is just funny to me. I'm finding it way more funny than I probably should. I think I am just weird.

Also funny was the fact that her friend locked them in the room together. That actually sounds like something I would do with someone else. Just to be mean, though. Hee hee.

So yeah, nice job!

Sorry! I'm slow getting to all my stories! I took a reading leave for a little while, I guess!

Anyway, this chapter had me cracking up seriously! The crazy love triangle... no, wait, there's too many people involved. It's like a crazy love quadrilateral or something. Anyway, great work with that! Way too hilarious for me to even comment on anymore.

Oh, and the Vincent was at this part:
Paul softened. “Alright, but you’ll have hell to pay with Father. Oh, did you know, Vincent’s brother is ‘spending a lot of time’ with Madeline.”
It's near the beginning.

That is all.

Okay, so something kind of confused me for a moment. Who is Vincent? Is it Victor? I didn't know if that was a typo or if I just got completely lost and forgot who all the characters were.

Why do guys have to make everything so complication? I mean, why is Calvin with the other girl now? Okay, so I know why he is with her, but WHY? Calvin's being too much of a wuss. Lol. Okay, maybe not really, but wow, he moved on fast. Actually, maybe it's Kristen who needs to toughen up a little bit.

Well written, I think.

Wow... I can definitely tell that you put a lot of effort into this chapter. I can definitely see a jump in quality from stuff I have read before. Like, seriously, this was very well written. I kind of feel bad for Kristen for having all this pressure on her, but then again, she's kind of the bad guy when it comes to Calvin, right? Well, I am a big fan of this kind of dichotomy of good versus evil... (okay, now you're probably like, "What?! Where does she get that?" It's like this: I love it where there's a "good" person with "evil" qualities, or vice versa. It just shows that no one is all good or all evil. Any story/character that has this is awesome in my opinion because it shows the reality of people and human nature.

Okay, that was a strange rant, no? Anyway... can't wait to see what kind of fate awaits her!

i like it. its a simple chapter and light. even with summertime's death. also your ending was just fine. don't be so ** yourself and underestimate your writeing. you made a great piece of work. thank you for posting.

I didn't think the ending was so bad. I thought that Calvin could have been around a little more in the earlier parts of the chapters. It would have made for some nice angst or something. I dunno what I am talking about actually. My own stories are terrible, so you probably shouldn't take my advice.

This was a sad but lovely update.

Okay.. is there something wrong with me for finding this line hilarious: "“It had better be. Practicing is the only thing I’ve been doing since father dearest announced…” she muttered." I could not stop laughing for some reason! I'm weird. But it was cute! Calvin has great self control to not attack Victor for that comment about Kristen. I wanted to punch him.

Keep up the good work!

Awsome chapter!

Interesting. Victor doesn't sound like much fun so far and it doesn't sound like he cares for Kristen very much. Nice work. Have a great day.

~Twilight Starr~

I noticed that a bit more was explained with the other girl (the cousin) and the language was a little bit more historical-ish. I'm glad you didn't go too overboard because then I probably would have lost interest.

It's kind of interesting though... how no one really seems truly happy with the directions their lives are going... hmm...

Sounds like they are headed for trouble.

~Twilight Starr~

Interesting. I wonder why she dislikes Victor so much. Perhaps, because she is forced into the arrangement? It kind of sounded like she really hadn't gotten to know him. Sorry for taking so long to return review. Have a fantastic day.

~Twilight Starr~

This is an interesting story you have begun. At first I was a bit hesitant to read... I'm not much into historical fiction... but the writing was a bit more modern than I expected, and that made it much for pleasant (for me) to read.

I'm not entirely sure I understand how Elene fits into the picture. I see that she's Kristen's best friend, but how is she connected with the Royal Family in the first place? Maybe that info comes along later.

Keep up the good work!