Oh, WOW.

You, Stutter Something Profound, are an amazing writer.

First of all; plays. That's not something seen too often on Fictionpress, huh? Secondly: WOW, again. This was so GOOD. So MEANINGFUL. I want to get up and film it right now! Do you want to be a screenwriter because you're well on your way to becoming one, if your other works are as good as this.

"Make Yourself at Home" is so DEEP and POWERFUL. I am amazed.

FANTASTIC JOB. Don't stop.

-Shadow

its really interesting, i must say...

its kind of weird wat laurence does.. like collecting people. but it's not like in a stalker way... i don't know.

its just... cool.

great job.

ur obviously a talented screen writer.

keep it up!