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Tipped
2008-03-01
ch 2,
O.O God in My Pocket is absolutely amazing...
no.peace.los.angeles
2008-02-05
ch 1,
I don't know why, but that totally made me laugh. Oh man. Dennis Kucinich. He's so irrelevant, even if he does keep trying to run for president. That's great. Keep writing! :)
Let It Rain
2008-02-02
ch 6,
They read like songs. And they just seem... unspeakably pretty. My favorite is "God In My Pocket."
sunday night sky
2008-01-21
ch 3,
I like the cavern tavern best... it flows really well and is full of emotion and honesty...

for some reason my reviews sound like a 2 year old has written them today... but all i mean to say is that i like this piece :)
sunday night sky
2008-01-21
ch 1,
I don't know who this Dennis Kucinich is...

oh wait, I have googled him now. I feel embarrassed for my lack of US knowledge.

I will read on to the next haiku now.
But I did enjoy this one :)
vaudeville summers
2008-01-10
ch 1,
ahaha great xD

~DeeAnna
Lurid Black
2008-01-10
ch 1,
Hehe it fit in well - like someone was speaking it, rather than trying to convert it into haiku.
Keep writing!
~Lurid~
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