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| Assana 2008-01-13 ch 1,  | abuse"both of you agreed"? am i in this? Oh I am sorry! (even if I am not in this, I am still sorry)!! me feel horrible =[ *hug* me sorry note: i like this poem...i can feel the emotion |
| simpleplan13 2008-01-12 ch 1, | abuseI like this piece because it shows how we dont think about what we say so much... I recently had a family member commit suicide and when people say I wanna kill myself I feel exactly as you do, but I try to keep in mind they don't know how their words are affecting me and it's not intentional and normally if you tell them it hurt you they apologize and try not to do it again... wow that is so not a review its totally advice I apologize The piece is nice and as I said in an odd way I can relate.. nice job |
| Lurid Black 2008-01-12 ch 1, | abuseSweet, well written, powerful, every word looks like its had deep thought put into it, keep writing, and i'll keep reading! ~Lurid~ |
| Twilight Starr 2008-01-11 ch 1, | abuseYou're right, but I'm betting your friend said something when she was really mad in the heat of the moment and she didn't really mean it. Great job expressing your feelings. Nice work. Have a brilliant day. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| .mate.feed.kill.repeat. 2008-01-10 ch 1, | abuseI think this was one of your most powerful and emotional pieces, and I liked it a lot. I found the lines "Say you hate her all you want, / But when she gives you something nice don't you dare flaunt," especially powerful and intriguing. I can, in some minute insignificant way, relate to this a little. My mom almost left - like walked out the door and left. Although I still have my mom, I'm still haunted by it. I wish there was something to say to you to, but I don't know what I can say. I hope you're feeling better now, and I think you should tell your friend that you didn't appreciate her comment. -stix- |
| melbell 2008-01-10 ch 1, | abuse*hugs* (5 minuntes later) *still hugging* |
| Princess-anna57 2008-01-10 ch 1, | abuseOhh powerful and quite sad. Always be positive and keep writing. ~Anna~ |