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| lovemyemoboy 2008-01-10 ch 1,  | abuseIt sucks when a great relationship/friendship gets ruined, especially when you don't know what went wrong. Good poem, nice flow of words. I liked these lines the best: That option doesn’t seem so bad anymore. At least you’d have to talk to me. Maybe you wouldn’t. Maybe we’d sit there forever, Waiting. |
| IrrevocableLove 2008-01-10 ch 1, | abuseThat was excellent! |
| DramaQueenMaureen 2008-01-10 ch 1, | abuseOHMAGAH I love it! And it wasn't totally emo! And it completely describes how I feel about a certain person who shall remain nameless... |
| Sillage le Las 2008-01-10 ch 1, | abusei love this. it realy gets to you. you can tell the writers feelings very clearly. confused , hurt, a pinch of hope, and ect. the way you wrote it (style) is really good . really really good. nice work. |
| GreenGirl (aka, its me, emm... 2008-01-10 ch 1, anon. | abusethis is really good!! ok, here goes: ~it's a lot less... synical (for lack of a better word) than your most recent poems which to be truthful I like. ~I really like how you showed the difference between past and present, using like, similar, but not exactly the same words. ~everyone's scared at one point or another, even if you thought they never could be ~may i inquire as to who threatened to lock you two up in a room?? lol ~my advice (although I know it's cliche): don't just sit around and wait. I don't want to go into too much more detail but hopefully you know what I mean good poem, i really like it! keep writing! |