every word is magic, I felt something magical when I read.

sad :[

but i love the confusing voice it's written in

"I.promise.the.world.won’t.hurt." love that line

konban wa

Beautiful. Absolutely stunning! I love the allusion here to Peter Pan and Tinkerbelle and how she wishes he would just be willing to grow up already because she loves him. :( Poor Tink.

Sorry this is so lamely short, but I'm exhausted and plan on going to sleep the moment I post my next piece. Just know - loved this. So heartfelt...

Zaijen
-Shan-

i like the parallel with Peter Pan and real life...it lets the reader imagine but keeps them focued on the issue...i like it a lot...