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| Nervous Breakdown 2008-01-14 ch 1,  | abuseI love the repetition you use. It makes the piece more... *thinks* i'm not sure of the word(stupid brain). But yeah, it's good! |
| Lurid Black 2008-01-10 ch 1, | abuseSweet, gives the reader a clear image of regret and lament. Keep writing, great work! ~Lurid~ |