YEah so she's crazy as shit too although I guess that was obvious when she helped Tristan dispose of two bodies. And what the hell Mark seriously you want to get with someone who helped a killer. I like this story even though everyone is out of their minds. Oh yeah "My god,” Marcello exclaims, “Does that girl have brown nipples? How odd!" I found that amusing cause I said the same thing when I saw pink nipples, it scared the shit outta me. hehe

Well shit... Marcello the bastard, and wtf? Tristan is out of his damn mind. HE killed 5 people?

I love how Maggie's excuse for everything is that she's too tired to do anything. That's hilarious. Her and Tristan are bat-shit crazy no matter what she says and Marcello is a big mccreeper. I like this story it's funny in a twisted way

damn, didn't see that coming.
very entertaining story.

I like the description tall, dark, and disturbing it fits Marcello.

~SirScott

Cool ending. I really like this story even though it isn't the kind of thing I usually read. The only problem was the spelling sometimes, but hey, you can't have everything! ;)

Anita is a cool name and a cool character. Good chapter.

~SirScott

I find this chapter to be quite homorous. Keep up the good work.

~SirScott

That's creepy to leave the blood under your finger nails. Good opening and good work with setting up the story line and introducing the readers to the characters. Scotch and bourbon taste nothing a like.

~SirScott

Holy crap! The ending was so sudden but disturbing!

Is she going to kill MArcello? I hope so I hope so!

Anyway, I really wasn't expecting that. I think you should've have put a little bit more into the ending, it seems somewhat rushed, but it's still good.

Marcello grosses me out and Anita is my favorite. Maggie is sort of an idiot, but I can't hate her. Tristan is just a child that breaks his toys when he's angry at them. I hope they toss him off a building.

You rock Octello!

Are Marcello and Anita going to sell Tristan and Maggie to the police? Is that where they get all they're money? Do they take bribes from cops whenever somebody shady checks in? That would be really neat if they did.

This was a great chapter. I can;t just imagine Tristan and Marcello drawing Maggie while she was naked and tied to a chair, raping her and then strangling her to death.

I love Anita too. She sort of reminds me of the girl from Ratatouille, but only in a slight sense.

The writing is still fantastic! I'm so shocked that anyone could produce something this amazing! Go you!

Hahaha, this chapter was amazing.

I love Tristan in a way that I would never date him because he might kill me with his fingernails.

I think she overreacted a bit after Marcello tried to 'seduce' her though. It's not like anything actually happened and it seems a bit much to just burst into tears over it.

This chapter wasn't quite as morbid as the rest (aside from being impolite to beggars and near rape)

I can't wait to read more... because it's amazing.

Oh! Questions are fun. I think that Anita and TDD (haha, genius) are up to something. Maybe they'll kill Maggie and Tristan and sell their toes on the black market?

I wouldn't be surprised, this story is amazing enough to incorporate that.

But the style is still consistently amazing, and consistency is impressive.

Your characters are hilarious and well-developed too.

I've gotten past being somewhat creeped out, so now I'm just laughing my ass of at all the humor.

I'm so greatful this is finished so I don't have to spend days waiting for updates.

Wow, insults turn him on.

Why would she even be remotely interested in him? Is she an idiot? Because only an idiot would find a man who jealously kills his ex-girlfriends 'cute'

either that, or she's just as psychotic as he is.

Something about this story is so appealing though! It's really amazing!

You have such a stupendous style. It's sort of a cross between that amazing writer who nobody ever notices, but the writing is still good enough to make those who read it obsessed; and the classic writer that brings in the actual readers because it's catchy and people can relate to the characters.

Morbid is so awesome... I think I'm falling in love!

Wow... this is so creepy.

But in a really good way! It's well-written, and your dialogue pops.

The plot is supremely well developed so far! I feel like there is sort of a background to these characters that I'm just not aware of.

I liked your use of the title in the story as well. I'm so glad I found this after searching through PILES of crud in the Drama section. This took me about an hour to find. I hadn't reviewed anything before it because I wasn't really in the mood, but your story pulled me out of that little stupor, so I commend you for your skill.

How did he kill his girlfriend?! CLAW her to death?

Morbid... me like...