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| water lorelei 2008-01-11 ch 1,  | abuseaw... (not a high squeal). This is sweet.. the wording is a little rough, but it sounds so genuine. Love ya! -Rachel |
| Unknown Survivor 2008-01-11 ch 1, | abuseCute and nicely done. Good job. ~Unknown Survivor~ |
| Blissfully Sarcastic 2008-01-11 ch 1, | abuseAwh. It's cute. The first stanza is a little had to get past though. Try to work on the wording a little. But I liked it nonetheless. |
| Princess-anna57 2008-01-10 ch 1, | abuseGreat job. Well done. Write on! ~Anna~ |
| Lurid Black 2008-01-10 ch 1, | abuseSweet, well written, seemed like every word was chosen with deep thought. Keep writing! ~Lurid~ |