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| firefairy27 2008-01-11 ch 1,  | abusePerhaps it's just me, but it all seems rather cliche... It doesn't have enough of an attraction to me for me to continue reading--but again, that might just be me ^^;; I'm a very picky reader. You might, however, try experiemnting with word choice and upper level deiction--they make stories more intriguing and entertaining. And I hope I haven't discouraged you from anything--I'm just picky is all, I do urge you to keep it up ^^ -Fairy |