I like this a lot.. the swallowing the sun in their eyes is such a powerful and beautiful image... its an awesome peice

I really hope you dont stop posting because you seem like a very talented writer.. and ill add you to my alerts so if you post I promise at least Ill read.. lol

i really love this piece, especially with how it ended. it completely tied it all together and left sort of a bittersweet feeling. it's fantastic.

I'M READING I'M READING!!
don't stop writing =[
and anyways.. even if ppl don't review it, it doesn't mean they don't read it!
hahaha i'm not making sense - but please keep writing because your work is
b e a u t i f u l
!

aw
nice imagery. very pretty

keep writing

chin up =]

konnichi wa

Ah?! No! You can't stop posting here! Please, please, please, please - I beg you! Please don't stop posting! :( *sob* *wail*

Zaijen
-Shan-

Loved how the last two lines just sorta flowed into everything. *gasp* what do u mean no one reads your stuff?? You have lots and lots of reviews!!