That's cute

1) Believe me, none of my English teachers has taught me the difference between a semi-colon and a colon. Humph, they expect us to figure grammar out on our own?!
2) I've been wondering--if Dave is so poor in English, then why is he still majoring in English? I mean, won't his professors "advise" him to switch to some other major? Hence, I don't know whether I should laugh or cry when I read that he has been pretending so that Autumn will tutor him. Gosh, he's so daring.

Aw so cute!

xx
Ali

I love it

You know, I think I loved this one-shot even more because it had to do with writing...It was so cute and I couldn't help but smile at the end! And thank goodness Dave wasn't as terrible at writing as you initially made him out to be -- that would have absolutely killed him in my eyes. But you didn't and he's a real brain...and I might be in love with a fictional character, all because he can write well!

lol nice story :) i thought it was pretty funny

Loved it!

- Rebekah

You should extent this and make it into a full-blown story! Turor is genius! A very great read, well-written, and creative! I really like Dave and Autumn. Plus the story was funny, which is always good. So yeah, I think it was great!!
I'm looking down at some of your reviews. He he. I live in Florida and 'throwed'is used more often here then I would like to admit, not all of us are that backwards. lol. Anyway great one-shot, that should be extended (wink, wink) cause I would totally read it. lol.

That's one of my pet peeves too! I can't stand it when people don't know how to properly use good and well...ugh. I liked this story!

That last line, with the well vs good thing was funny. Overall, I really liked this. Creative and cute. Good job! :)

Oh my, that was a riot! Autumn sounds just like me. I'm constantly correcting people. Haha. You underestimate your talent as a writer. This is the best, most unique thing I've ever read. Usually stories about writing are pretty boring and straight to the point, but dang, this was excellent.

You did very 'good'! :P

Really cute. I really liked it. The part about how Dave started to feel that everyone around him was all crap, and so couldn't write, but then how just one person's short drabble about everything that goes on in life and the fakeness of it all, allured him towards Autumn. It was really very nice.

Wow, Mr Hottie is really smart. No just academically, haha.

Haha, i loved this, very cute :)

I pretty much laughed the whole way through. escpecially the part where she's like, "i can't have a stalker right now!"
that was funny. and then she like, offered to provide him with other more stalkable girls :P

very good, totally loved it :D

Yay! I liked that! the stalkerish tutoring thing. Except it turned out not to be so stalkerish ater all. Well... It was well-written. And funn at parts. You're a good writer, so... I don't know what to say, really. Favorited.