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| Sagaciouspnay 2008-02-26 ch 1,   | this is a breathtaking poem. line by line it puts me on edge and there's this image i get. i love it! i love the idea of connecting the spaces between "you&i". very creative idea =D this is in my faves list! keep writing :) |
| Charity F 2008-02-13 ch 1, | Another lovely poem. I felt the repetition of 'reaching' in stanza 4 wasn't doing you any favours. But that's it. Eveything else in incredibly and entirely, you. Congrats. |
| Lurid Black 2008-01-12 ch 1, | Sweet, well written 'you&I, dazed by far off reflections' thats really well thought up, keep writing! ~Lurid~ |
| simpleplan13 2008-01-12 ch 1, | I like the format and the way the two lines in parenthesis connect... I also really love the part about the invisible thread.. great piece |
| Hermione-Hermyown 2008-01-11 ch 1, | That was a really great poem! You have lots of talent! Keep up the great work. I just love the part: Promises that have to be broken, risks that have to be taken. It's so true. Promises do get broken and risks have to be taken. But yet we all hold on. I love it! Keep up the good work. |
| The Postscript 2008-01-11 ch 1, | Really great. I especially like the idea of an invisible thread - kind of like how sometimes there is just a natural, innate connection between two people that you feel. Awesome work - keep writing, k. |
| Kenken 2008-01-11 ch 1, | Nice poem you wrote there. I like the title and the words you used throughout the poem. I actually really liked the parts "(& you are...)" and "(because, i am...)" |
| Princess-anna57 2008-01-11 ch 1, | This is good. I like "a speechless heart". Write on! ~Anna~ ^_^ |