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Reviews For: She Believes in Love

IrrevocableLove
2008-01-14
ch 1,
Whoa. Usually, like, poems that are rhyming are pretty corny. But not this one! This was possible one of the greatest poems I've read on this site so far! I enjoyed it very much!
Brava!
Lurid Black
2008-01-11
ch 1,
Wow, you've really out done your- rhyme in short lines standard here lol, this is the best you've written (or just my fave)
Not only is does it rhyme, but it also discribes how one would feel as well, awesome poem! Really really well written, sweet work, keep writing!!
pinkfairydust
2008-01-11
ch 1,
i love this poem =D
i like how the lines are short.. i don't know why but i think it makes it simpler to read or something..
i also like the rhyme .. normally i don't go for rhyming poems coz it seems so restricted, but this one is an exception =]
keep up the good work!
Kishu-san
2008-01-11
ch 1,
Its really beautiful. I wish i could write poems like that. I write good once but... i always write them about the same subject so i geuss they get kind of boring to most people.
Arwen Dune
2008-01-11
ch 1,
It's good but its chgoppy you could combine some of the lines
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