 Miss Writer 2008-05-19 . chapter 1While reading this I could feel that the main character was torn between her desires and her conflicting thoughts of her wanting to feel pleasure,but at the same time her feeling wrong about being in that situation. I truly felt the pain and agony she was going through. the male character came off cold and aloof when he got what he wanted from the situation. This is so real to life that I can identify with the female character as I have been in a situation like that. Great emotional story. |