nice ideas. Like how it ends positively.

I like the concept behind this piece but I found it a bit too straightforward. But it was still very nicely done. Just a typo perhaps...but heroin doesn't have an "e" on the end. ^^ Keep up the good work.

~Unknown Survivor~

Wow, this was really upbeat and positive. Thanks for that. I love the ending... /And continue living/ It's very powerful. Kudos. ~CD