 Patricia Louise 2008-03-11 . chapter 1These remind me of a song by Pat Benatar. Anyhow, these are great. I love haikus. I need to write one or two myself. I used to hate them. I just need some practice. The words chosen are great, and I love the fire imagery. |
 simpleplan13 2008-01-25 . chapter 1I like them.. they could stand alone but they also fit wonderfully together... the only thing i didnt like was how you used rage twice in the middle haiku.. other than that it was awesome |
 Professor Doctor 2008-01-20 . chapter 1Thats very pretty, and very sad.
You should post things more often though.
Its like you've fallen off the face of the earth
Regards,
Ari |
 ADSpencer 2008-01-14 . chapter 1Nice series of poems! Great job. The last one really wraps them together. Great to see some more stuff from you. |
 smile for the sunshine 2008-01-11 . chapter 1i dont usually like haiku writing but i think if you combine three or more like you did, i think it works out nicely and it seems more complete. good work. i liked this. keep writing. = ) |