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Patricia Louise
2008-03-11
ch 1,
abuseThese remind me of a song by Pat Benatar. Anyhow, these are great. I love haikus. I need to write one or two myself. I used to hate them. I just need some practice. The words chosen are great, and I love the fire imagery.
simpleplan13
2008-01-25
ch 1,
abuseI like them.. they could stand alone but they also fit wonderfully together... the only thing i didnt like was how you used rage twice in the middle haiku.. other than that it was awesome
Falaba Todd
2008-01-20
ch 1,
abuseThats very pretty, and very sad.
You should post things more often though.
Its like you've fallen off the face of the earth

Regards,
Ari
ADSpencer
2008-01-14
ch 1,
abuseNice series of poems! Great job. The last one really wraps them together. Great to see some more stuff from you.
smile for the sunshine
2008-01-11
ch 1,
abusei dont usually like haiku writing but i think if you combine three or more like you did, i think it works out nicely and it seems more complete. good work. i liked this. keep writing. = )
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