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| Patricia Louise 2008-03-11 ch 1,  | abuseThese remind me of a song by Pat Benatar. Anyhow, these are great. I love haikus. I need to write one or two myself. I used to hate them. I just need some practice. The words chosen are great, and I love the fire imagery. |
| simpleplan13 2008-01-25 ch 1, | abuseI like them.. they could stand alone but they also fit wonderfully together... the only thing i didnt like was how you used rage twice in the middle haiku.. other than that it was awesome |
| Falaba Todd 2008-01-20 ch 1, | abuseThats very pretty, and very sad. You should post things more often though. Its like you've fallen off the face of the earth Regards, Ari |
| ADSpencer 2008-01-14 ch 1, | abuseNice series of poems! Great job. The last one really wraps them together. Great to see some more stuff from you. |
| smile for the sunshine 2008-01-11 ch 1, | abusei dont usually like haiku writing but i think if you combine three or more like you did, i think it works out nicely and it seems more complete. good work. i liked this. keep writing. = ) |