I'm probably a bit late reviewing this, but who cares?
Loved it. So much. It was so intense - so real. Totally amazing.
Wicked job. You *need* to do more. Maybe continue it with the same level of angst and clearness, but on a different topic.
Luv it.

So... as a 18 year old girl with a boyfriend 9 years older then me... you caught it.

You grabbed the emotions that do run through the female's mind as having sex with someone so much older.. I would be really interested to see if you could continue this... and keep the same intensity and accuracy. Good Job.
~DiabloDarkmoon

...ngh

I think you know what I think about this one. Yes pls! lol. I dunno which part I like better, the smut or the kissing tears away bit, cos I really like the latter. =)