I like that one. I really do. I think it's almost got me in the mood of writing again

... Holy cow! How misleading! You mentioned Gary Allan & I thought "Oh this is going to have a sweet country rhythm to it" -- And it so very much does not (all improper grammar is intentional in this review... I think). I really like it, though. It opens all nice and slow with Gary Allan's lines and then dives right into... something else. For some reason the line "perfection with you, here wrapped up in a blanket of sun, so warm- a stark contrast to the chill in my bones" really sticks out at me; I really love that (those) line(s). I could analyze the heck out of everything! But I won't because I tend to scare people when I do that... Now I just HAVE to go read the rest of your poetry if it's half as good as this!

try this reminds me of the beach the jets flying over love ya

this is a beautiful piece.. the descriptions are wonderful and the idea of the airplanes are great.. awesome job

STUNNING! a beautiful piece, very discriptive and pretty, and then towards the end i sensed a change in tone, like it went from 'being 100% sure' to 'uncertain', i could be wrong, but that's my interpretation, and even though the lyrics aren't yours, the way you used them like knocked all the air out of me, brilliant! wow...
i mean it started off all peaceful and perfect, and then reality crashed, really good, i really like this one =)

._. Wow, as always your descriptions are way out of my league. XD This is really good o__o If I was in my right mind I'd say more, but I can't atm.
"I don't care what the sky says, please just stay with me"

Wow.

OH MY GOD! Nikki it's beautiful, exactly what i was thinking about yesterday, and now. I'm scared too. (Dad told me i was being selfish about the whole college thing.)Whatever.
It's a great poem. heehee... coke?

I love it, it's beautiful :D