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Reviews For: The Seldom Told Tragedy of the Timekeeper's Wife

Audie Scott
2008-03-04
ch 1,
abuseGreat theme; the simple yet haunting question of time and Time. well written, gripping, and certainly not cliche or boring.
Bladen Wilder
2008-02-06
ch 1,
abuseI am speechless! Wait a minute! I'm talking. Okay so, I found my voice. Love it! Love it! Dare I say it again? Love it!
Prieda Solo
2008-01-23
ch 1,
abusewow. I loved this to bits. Quite scary and shivery and the way the pace just goes rocketing along at the end...wonderful :)

not completely convinced about the Peter Pan referance at the end, but otherwise this was an amazingly enjoyable story. No other criticisms at all. great work. *fav
Doubleday
2008-01-20
ch 1,
abuseThat was an excellent piece. The characterization and story line was compelling. The structure and flow was seamless and the details gave it life. The ending was ideal. Great job.
Vixen of Vienna
2008-01-16
ch 1,
abuseOh wow ... Yeah, that is kind of creepy. It reminded me of Poe's ... with the man hearing the heart beat from below the floor boards; that story. Good job with the time references. I liked the alitteration of mistress of minutes and countess of cogs.
sincerely disregard
2008-01-11
ch 1,
abuseVery interesting. The way everything falls apart at the end is inventive and the final connection to Peter Pan is brilliant.
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