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| Audie Scott 2008-03-04 ch 1, | abuseGreat theme; the simple yet haunting question of time and Time. well written, gripping, and certainly not cliche or boring. |
| Bladen Wilder 2008-02-06 ch 1, | abuseI am speechless! Wait a minute! I'm talking. Okay so, I found my voice. Love it! Love it! Dare I say it again? Love it! |
| Prieda Solo 2008-01-23 ch 1, | abusewow. I loved this to bits. Quite scary and shivery and the way the pace just goes rocketing along at the end...wonderful :) not completely convinced about the Peter Pan referance at the end, but otherwise this was an amazingly enjoyable story. No other criticisms at all. great work. *fav |
| Doubleday 2008-01-20 ch 1, | abuseThat was an excellent piece. The characterization and story line was compelling. The structure and flow was seamless and the details gave it life. The ending was ideal. Great job. |
| Vixen of Vienna 2008-01-16 ch 1, | abuseOh wow ... Yeah, that is kind of creepy. It reminded me of Poe's ... with the man hearing the heart beat from below the floor boards; that story. Good job with the time references. I liked the alitteration of mistress of minutes and countess of cogs. |
| sincerely disregard 2008-01-11 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting. The way everything falls apart at the end is inventive and the final connection to Peter Pan is brilliant. |