"It was like trying to reach out and pluck something from behind the surface of a mirror" i really, really like that simile. i never heard it before and it stuck with me.

im feeling so repetitive when i read your stories. its like im just saying the same thing over and over. this was awesome. well written. lovely use of vocab and words. good plotline...and that's such a good thing.

hey one more thing. when are you going to update the stories? lol. its a long time since ive seen a new chapter up. just so you know im still looking forward to reading them.

keep up the great work.

Good. Not like the bad punctuation and things like that I usually find on Fictionpress. But come on, please raise the rating! Call that K? Good writing, bad rating.

I don't want you to think I'm criticizing or anything, just I think you need to raise the rating.