Reviews for What's Your Name, Anyways

SparklingStar25 2008-01-14 ch 1,	abuselovely one shot!too cute!
beccabrighteyes 2008-01-12 ch 1,	abuseAdorable! Absolutely adorable. A great feel-good story.
crazygrl2468 2008-01-12 ch 1,	abuseaww that was cute!
Haroo 2008-01-12 ch 1,	abuseFirst of all, hahaha! Considering you claimed to be 14 y/o, you painted college life quite closely :) There were some grammar errors though. I thought I saw run-ons, misspelling(gasp!). There were some redundant ideas. (for example, in the first paragraph: "eerily calm" and "so quiet" are pretty much the same idea) Funny characters. Rumor (interesting choice of name by the way) makes a paper plane in class? That is plain classic! Kiss after a short conversation seems unlikely though. I don't think a girl would accept a kiss from a guy after a short meeting like that(unless she's really really drunk) I am guessing you usually write in first person. I do think the story would have worked better if it were written in first person. ("Wait- did she just say paper plane?" is almost exclusively for first person) Barbie Girl is his ringtone? Haha! "-end-" to end a story is weak. The same reason nobody starts a story with "-start-". In all in all, nice characters and description for the most part. I would watch out for misspelling and grammar problems if I were you though. The story was very enjoyable. I look forward to seeing some more pieces :)