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Heather F. C 2008-07-21 ch 12,	abusei really like the story!! and the beast is... well, gorgeous! update soon :D
Younowhoim 2008-07-20 ch 12,	abusePlease update!
iluvsweep 2008-07-17 ch 12,	abuseok so just read this entire story now...despite the fact it's 2am, and i have to get up at 6am! stupid summer jobs ugh...but least i get paid :D ...but anyway, i just had to leave you a review, in the hope that maybe you might get some of your creativity back for a while!! this is seriously a fantastic story. most of the stories i read (and i read a lot on fictionpress haha) if they have a spunky character, then at times it feels a little forced and quite predictable, but i LOVE andrea!! she's absolutely amazing! she seems like an actual real person, her character's been developed really well, and you can't predict what she's going to do either, a big difference from all other stories. i certainly didn't see her telling him off within 5mins of properly meeting him. but i like that i couldn't tell that, just like i love christopher! ok so christopher's background may be slightly predictable, jilted lover just like her, doesn't let people in anymore etc, but i love reading about him! i'm trying so hard to look for little signs that he might be picking up on similarities between her and 'cinderella', like her honesty and being able to talk back, and calling her smart **, sounds a little rude but you can tell he means it in a sarcastic but not maliciously way. you may want to try working a big more on his character, but i guess they haven't really had that much interaction yet, so you haven't had a chance as it's all from andrea's point of view...speaking of which though, would you ever try putting a chapter in from his point of view? it'd be really interesting to see what he thinks of andrea, and the 'woman in white' (these are all just ideas, not complaining in the slightest!) ok so back to christopher :D i reckon he's gonna slowly fall in love with her as his PA, somehow find out ages later about her being Cinderella...now i would say i reckon he'll blow up at her first, for lying etc, but i'm not sure now! and i defintely don't know how she'll react cos i can't predict her! and who knows, maybe she'll tell him herself when she can't handle working for him anymore? oh, and i hope she does get sucess as a writer and gets to network with all the big names...see there's so much more to happen with this story, and i saw you wrote to someone else earlier that this is going to span over a year, there's so much that will happen in that time, i can't wait!! i want to predict it...but i know i won't be right like i guessed that he invited her on this trip cos she was funny on the phone to him, and he was somehow intrigued by her ability to laugh at him, so he thought he'd invite her along...so i thought he'd act differently, but he still does his normal flirting with other girls, being a general beast as andrea says, which is great. i thought they might become closer this trip, but maybe something big will happen to have some significant change in their relationship or something...just ah the possibilities...you have to write some more for this soon! please do :) i've tried my best to inspire you by praising your story endlessly! much like andrea, i think you could be a professional writer! and i'm not just saying that to try and get the next update quicker ;-) haha...but seriously, i have you on author alert and my favourites list, i sincerely hope to see your name in my inbox very soon!! ps, well done for the thesis!
kazekage13 2008-07-13 ch 12,	abuseplease update this as soon as you can.
knj323 2008-07-11 ch 1,	abuseplease update it's been two months and i've been dying
Fairytale Rescue 2008-07-11 ch 12,	abusePlease, please, PLEASE update soon! I love your story, very modernist Cinderella like.
feisty sonnet 2008-07-07 ch 11,	abusei want to know what happens next. can't wait for the update...hope it doesn't it take too long...it's already two months since you last updated...good luck on your thesis!
Ml4eva2009 2008-07-06 ch 12,	abuseI am enthralled! Please update soon!
StiCky-ICky1491 2008-06-20 ch 12,	abuseyea definitely am loving what i am reading! i cannot wait til u update!
splotchy 2008-06-19 ch 12,	abuseHot bosses rock don't they? They rock even more if they are in love/lust with you. Heh heh. Update soon!
rosieroo 2008-06-15 ch 12,	abuseplease update soon! this story is absolutely AWESOME and i LOVE IT! personally, if he cant tell his Cinderella's right in front of his eyes, he doesn't deserve her! well... hope to see the next chapter soon!!
dOrKy-GuRl03 2008-06-11 ch 12,	abusehmm i wonder if her boss know that its her that he kissed..i doubt it..lol..i loved it..can't wait for the next chapter to update...bye..bye...
bubblie130 2008-05-23 ch 12,	abuselove,love,love this story i cant wait to c were it is headed. Update soon :D
I Murder on Impulse 2008-05-23 ch 12,	abuseouch haha nice! keep it up! xx
Lethe's Oblivion 2008-05-22 ch 12,	abuseI absolutely adore this story, and Andy. I can't wait to see Christopher's reaction when he finds out that she's his 'Cinderella.' (im)patiently waiting for the next update =]

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