 Pieces of the sun 2009-09-27 . chapter 30I have to admit that I found Karia to be pretty annoying in the beginning but I grew to love her. Jason is my favorite character for sure though.
This is one of the best stories I've read on FP. Seriously. I love how the character's intertwine and you're not just focusing on one conflict, one character. It reminds me of the movies Elephant and 2:37, both which use the same method of story telling as you do. This story needs more recognition!! |
 Ever Living. 2008-12-19 . chapter 1"She smiled at me and I returned it with a sneer. A look of shock washed over her face and she looked back to the round."
Should be ground. Favorite story, author and story alert. |
 big.break.and.laryngitis 2008-07-24 . chapter 27aw. i like it. jason's always been my favorite, whatever i may or may not have said otherwise. they're so cute.
so sad it's over, but it was a lovely ending.
rock on! |
 big.break.and.laryngitis 2008-04-07 . chapter 23aw. i bet he's cute. i hope she asks him out and all. i bet he'd say yes.
or maybe not. but if it was a trashy romance novel, he SO would. hee. so cute.
post more soon! |
 big.break.and.laryngitis 2008-03-27 . chapter 22aw, he's cute!
yeah... guys like that, all hopeless and stuff, it's precious. i loveit!
post more soon! (you know what i just noticed? the initials of "post more soon" are pms... just pointing that out... i'm a little sugar-high, so i think it's funny... hm... maybe it actually is...) |
 big.break.and.laryngitis 2008-03-19 . chapter 21aw... poor brendan and charlie... well, i hope everything works out for them, and his mom's okay with it and such.
post more soon? :D |
 big.break.and.laryngitis 2008-03-11 . chapter 20aw. poor brendan.
TELL CHARLIE NOT TO END IT, DAMMIT!
but yeah. now or never is right.
post more asap! |
 Ess. 2008-03-10 . chapter 4 Hi! First of all, it's a really good story so far. You write well.
And secondly, I just found a small typo if you want to fix it. You said "If her told her how I felt, she and I could be in a relationship, man." Wouldn't it be "If I...?" Just an observation. =D.
Keep writing, can't wait to read more. =).
- Ess. |
 big.break.and.laryngitis 2008-03-09 . chapter 19oh, jeez. pregnancy, that's... well, obviously she has to tell him... well, no, she doesn't, but she really should...
i like him, though. |
 Black and White Rainbows 2008-03-09 . chapter 19Wait I'm kinda starting to get confused. Are you going to be continuing the stories? Or does it end at now or never?
Other than my confused brain...
I really like these stories! Update soon! |
 big.break.and.laryngitis 2008-02-26 . chapter 18aw, jeez.
i really hope he chickened out on that one :|
abby seems cool, though. maybe she wouldn't care. i probably wouldn't, unless there was like, a ton of people there. and there isn't. so, y'know...
but yeah.
good chapter, post more soon! |
 big.break.and.laryngitis 2008-02-23 . chapter 17that's sad.
i hope she apologized.
very sweet, though, in a way.
post more soon! |
 littleoneofdoom 2008-02-22 . chapter 17 o.0
again, awesome. |
 WriterGurl123 2008-02-11 . chapter 16I like that it's in a different person's perspective each time.
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 big.break.and.laryngitis 2008-02-10 . chapter 15i definitely liked this chapter.
it's cool, these are based on true stories. i'm not sure if i mentioned it, but nothing in my life is cool enough to write a story of.
anyways, this was good. please update as soon as you can! |