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big.break.and.laryngitis
2008-07-24
ch 27,
abuseaw. i like it. jason's always been my favorite, whatever i may or may not have said otherwise. they're so cute.

so sad it's over, but it was a lovely ending.

rock on!
big.break.and.laryngitis
2008-04-07
ch 23,
abuseaw. i bet he's cute. i hope she asks him out and all. i bet he'd say yes.

or maybe not. but if it was a trashy romance novel, he SO would. hee. so cute.

post more soon!
big.break.and.laryngitis
2008-03-27
ch 22,
abuseaw, he's cute!

yeah... guys like that, all hopeless and stuff, it's precious. i loveit!

post more soon! (you know what i just noticed? the initials of "post more soon" are pms... just pointing that out... i'm a little sugar-high, so i think it's funny... hm... maybe it actually is...)
big.break.and.laryngitis
2008-03-19
ch 21,
abuseaw... poor brendan and charlie... well, i hope everything works out for them, and his mom's okay with it and such.

post more soon? :D
big.break.and.laryngitis
2008-03-11
ch 20,
abuseaw. poor brendan.

TELL CHARLIE NOT TO END IT, DAMMIT!

but yeah. now or never is right.

post more asap!
Ess.
2008-03-10
ch 4, anon.
abuseHi! First of all, it's a really good story so far. You write well.
And secondly, I just found a small typo if you want to fix it. You said "If her told her how I felt, she and I could be in a relationship, man." Wouldn't it be "If I...?" Just an observation. =D.
Keep writing, can't wait to read more. =).

- Ess.
big.break.and.laryngitis
2008-03-09
ch 19,
abuseoh, jeez. pregnancy, that's... well, obviously she has to tell him... well, no, she doesn't, but she really should...

i like him, though.
Brown eyes Bold Lashes
2008-03-09
ch 19,
abuseWait I'm kinda starting to get confused. Are you going to be continuing the stories? Or does it end at now or never?

Other than my confused brain...

I really like these stories! Update soon!
big.break.and.laryngitis
2008-02-26
ch 18,
abuseaw, jeez.

i really hope he chickened out on that one :|

abby seems cool, though. maybe she wouldn't care. i probably wouldn't, unless there was like, a ton of people there. and there isn't. so, y'know...

but yeah.

good chapter, post more soon!
big.break.and.laryngitis
2008-02-23
ch 17,
abusethat's sad.

i hope she apologized.

very sweet, though, in a way.

post more soon!
littleoneofdoom
2008-02-22
ch 17, anon.
abuseo.0
again, awesome.
WriterGurl123
2008-02-11
ch 16,
abuseI like that it's in a different person's perspective each time.

Post More Soon
big.break.and.laryngitis
2008-02-10
ch 15,
abusei definitely liked this chapter.

it's cool, these are based on true stories. i'm not sure if i mentioned it, but nothing in my life is cool enough to write a story of.

anyways, this was good. please update as soon as you can!
big.break.and.laryngitis
2008-02-07
ch 14,
abusevery good chapter, i must say.

keep it up, i absolutely love it!
LittleOneOfDoom
2008-02-07
ch 14,
abuseanother great chapter! i can't wait to see who the next narrator is.
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