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| big.break.and.laryngitis 2008-07-24 ch 27,  | abuseaw. i like it. jason's always been my favorite, whatever i may or may not have said otherwise. they're so cute. so sad it's over, but it was a lovely ending. rock on! |
| big.break.and.laryngitis 2008-04-07 ch 23, | abuseaw. i bet he's cute. i hope she asks him out and all. i bet he'd say yes. or maybe not. but if it was a trashy romance novel, he SO would. hee. so cute. post more soon! |
| big.break.and.laryngitis 2008-03-27 ch 22, | abuseaw, he's cute! yeah... guys like that, all hopeless and stuff, it's precious. i loveit! post more soon! (you know what i just noticed? the initials of "post more soon" are pms... just pointing that out... i'm a little sugar-high, so i think it's funny... hm... maybe it actually is...) |
| big.break.and.laryngitis 2008-03-19 ch 21, | abuseaw... poor brendan and charlie... well, i hope everything works out for them, and his mom's okay with it and such. post more soon? :D |
| big.break.and.laryngitis 2008-03-11 ch 20, | abuseaw. poor brendan. TELL CHARLIE NOT TO END IT, DAMMIT! but yeah. now or never is right. post more asap! |
| Ess. 2008-03-10 ch 4, anon. | abuseHi! First of all, it's a really good story so far. You write well. And secondly, I just found a small typo if you want to fix it. You said "If her told her how I felt, she and I could be in a relationship, man." Wouldn't it be "If I...?" Just an observation. =D. Keep writing, can't wait to read more. =). - Ess. |
| big.break.and.laryngitis 2008-03-09 ch 19, | abuseoh, jeez. pregnancy, that's... well, obviously she has to tell him... well, no, she doesn't, but she really should... i like him, though. |
| Brown eyes Bold Lashes 2008-03-09 ch 19, | abuseWait I'm kinda starting to get confused. Are you going to be continuing the stories? Or does it end at now or never? Other than my confused brain... I really like these stories! Update soon! |
| big.break.and.laryngitis 2008-02-26 ch 18, | abuseaw, jeez. i really hope he chickened out on that one :| abby seems cool, though. maybe she wouldn't care. i probably wouldn't, unless there was like, a ton of people there. and there isn't. so, y'know... but yeah. good chapter, post more soon! |
| big.break.and.laryngitis 2008-02-23 ch 17, | abusethat's sad. i hope she apologized. very sweet, though, in a way. post more soon! |
| littleoneofdoom 2008-02-22 ch 17, anon. | abuseo.0 again, awesome. |
| WriterGurl123 2008-02-11 ch 16, | abuseI like that it's in a different person's perspective each time. Post More Soon |
| big.break.and.laryngitis 2008-02-10 ch 15, | abusei definitely liked this chapter. it's cool, these are based on true stories. i'm not sure if i mentioned it, but nothing in my life is cool enough to write a story of. anyways, this was good. please update as soon as you can! |
| big.break.and.laryngitis 2008-02-07 ch 14, | abusevery good chapter, i must say. keep it up, i absolutely love it! |
| LittleOneOfDoom 2008-02-07 ch 14, | abuseanother great chapter! i can't wait to see who the next narrator is. |