Another great poem Lady Glass! I guess the only problem is the lack of obvious rhythm. I say obvious because I very well could be missing the talent I know is in there. ;) Great job though my Lady. :)

It seems odd to me that you expect them to notice but you know they wont see it because they're blind... but other than that I like this piece a lot.. the black and white photo part with the red lips and blue eyes was a great image as was all teh descriptions of the water... I also like how the different stanzas relate to each other

I like this one.

kinda choppy though.

Im pretty sure that you meant for it to be that way.

Reminds me of a fractal. Peice by peice it makes no sense, but when you take the whole of it, you get a nice picture.

SoL

Great job, I like this one a lot :)

this was really bittersweet, i like it.

good job. :]