Reviews for Dreams of Roses - FictionPress.com

Isca 2008-07-05 ch 1,	abuse"Imagine what the people of the world can do." Claps An amazing line!
Jesusfreak43091 2008-06-07 ch 1,	abusewow, i really like this one!! favs list! you did a really good job with this, you've painted a clear picture of each flower and the word choice is soothing; calming i think it flows well, i like the way you structed it and how it flows smoothly from one rose to the next as far as i can see, there were no grammatical errors or errors of any kind =] and i really like the last stanza. it completes thhe poem. it kinda just hits you and makes you think
Sexy vampirechick 2008-06-02 ch 1,	abuseFunny thing is,I seem to watching a movie just now and it had falling rose petals at the moment I started reading this poem. It was really orginal how you used the different color of roses to define different emotions. The last line wasn't so strong as to me.Maybe you should try changing it a little.Not sure exactly how,but..I'm sure your creative and would think of something.
simpleplan13 2008-06-01 ch 1,	abuseThe whole different color rose thing was really well done. I like the questions too. The only suggestion I might make is to separate it into stanzas.
bittersea15 2008-01-12 ch 1,	abuseAbsolutely breathtaking! I love it! Never looked at roses that way! Beautifully written.