Reviews for Just Smile For Me

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Haydie 2008-10-29 ch 1,	god...i love your writing. it's odd, only your stories can scare me now... ...or interest me, really... SO DON'T STOP WRITING.
Demon 18 2008-09-25 ch 1,	It's weird, but in a good way. I like it.
DemolishedDream 2008-09-15 ch 1,	Beautiful dialogue, well-placed narration. I very much enjoyed this (:
CatBear 2008-09-08 ch 1,	What's really fantastic about this is the dialogue. Whoever it is who's carving up these ladies is a really charismatic, intriguing guy.
Ecaterina Dracula 2008-09-04 ch 1,	Creepy :D I love your storys so far they are just my type of messed up-y-ness... but anyway :D
Koki Enwai 2008-08-15 ch 1,	Oh, wow. Beautifully twisted. I loved the narration. - Koki
Death Dispenser 2008-07-02 ch 1,	i liked it. i think of the guy as a sort of frustrated photographer. it seems like it would be on a show like criminal minds or something. i hope i didn't insult you, if you hate the show. but good job!
Dark Dementium 2008-03-30 ch 1,	Oh...my...ew. That was so awesomely disturbing, I don't even know where to start. One thing I have noticed about you is that you have the most creative ideas in your head. That's one quality I really like. Another thing is that you sure know how to paint a picture, and paint it well. I loved the descriptions in this story, from the pain the girl was experiencing, to the creepy mannerisms of the murderer. Well done, as always! I look forward to reading more horror stories from you!
Distilledfx 2008-03-24 ch 1,	Wow I think I might have found someone who is as twisted as me. I love writing for shock and so this story just worked for me. You don't stop anywhere for too long and keep the pace up. You've also shown me that shock doesn't just come from twists, but from a lot of things. I like writing horror, and I like reading well written horror too. Awesome work
breannabananaxx 2008-02-20 ch 1,	ahh, i like this lots. very, very, very creepy. and i like it a lot for that. ahh, creepy. -shivers-. two thumbs up : ]. -breanna
Darkly Dreaming 2008-02-02 ch 1,	Dude...freaky... nods Kewl... ~SRC~
Captain Walsh 2008-01-29 ch 1,	My lord. This is so good! It's so dark! I kinda feel sorry for the killer though. I especially love the sentence "The knife slid gracefully over her cheek".
xDancingintheRainx 2008-01-26 ch 1,	That definitely gave me the chills. This piece is rather gruesome, but it has this really twisted beauty to it too. Your word choice was exquisite and really made the piece come to life. Great work! Thanks for the review. =)
n. paige 2008-01-13 ch 1,	this reminds me of "The Black Delila(sp?)" Is that were you got the idea? But I think that I would make myself smile... even through the pain, even if it was more of a grimace than a smile...
that sucks 2008-01-13 ch 1,	creepy but awesome

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