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Reviews For: Lord, Hear My Cry

PrincessPeaches
2008-03-09
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abuseAww this is sweet.
I great poem! :)
KaseyAngel
2008-02-21
ch 1,
abuseThis is really pretty. but it's sad too...
Praying for Rain
2008-02-20
ch 1,
abuseYou're extremely Talented. I enjoyed reading your stuff. =]
Snowplum
2008-01-30
ch 1,
abusehi snowplum's here! I love it!u express ur sadness in this poem very well. 2 thumbs up =)
The.Wizard.Pen.Dragon
2008-01-21
ch 1,
abuseI like how you said that you couldn't be there for your friend as much as God can. And this poem is a great example of your own God-given writing gift!
Write on!
Pen.Dragon
Flying Colors
2008-01-15
ch 1,
abuseOh gosh I've done this too. It's hard. Lovely, lovely.
review
2008-01-12
ch 1,
abuseits terribly sad and moving. and i think thats enough to make this a masterpiece.
may the Lord keep both you and her.
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