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| OneLastEndeavor 2008-01-30 ch 1, | abuseWonderfully sarcastic and a fresh read, indeed! Transitions between, er, "paragraphs" are a bit choppy, especially between 1st and 2nd but it's an easy fix. Enjoyable to read though short. I like it, almost as much as I like using fragments to review other writers. :). |
| essenceflower 2008-01-12 ch 1, | abusethumbs up ^_^ |
| LovelyGal411 2008-01-12 ch 1, | abuseNice story! :) It kind of reminds me of myself, lol. |