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OneLastEndeavor
2008-01-30
ch 1,
abuseWonderfully sarcastic and a fresh read, indeed! Transitions between, er, "paragraphs" are a bit choppy, especially between 1st and 2nd but it's an easy fix. Enjoyable to read though short. I like it, almost as much as I like using fragments to review other writers. :).
essenceflower
2008-01-12
ch 1,
abusethumbs up ^_^
LovelyGal411
2008-01-12
ch 1,
abuseNice story! :) It kind of reminds me of myself, lol.
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