I only have this to say " Yay for gay bio genetically engineered twins who aren't related and like to have gay sex! YAY!"

. . . . , I likes it :)

Ahh lady, you never fail to impress!! You intrigued me in high school, and continue to do so now, A unique individual, and a gifted storyteller. I must admit that I like mood music better, but this is still in the offing, so I'll reserve judgement until there's more to go on.

This is starting to get better! Unfortunately, I think that Kurt died too fast. Maybe you could tell a little about a few of the days that Sieg spent with him? I dunno... It just seems to be moving too quickly. It could also use a bit more detail in some places. Like in person or room desription. Other than that, it looks pretty good. ^.^ I can't wait untill the next chapter!

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*twitches* My god... it's like... gabolerabolacoin. XP Maybe I'll like it once their identities have been established. ^.^ And you still had better not delete Mood Music. I loves it too much. *huggles Makkura* Your writing IS more professional... and it is alot like some of the sci-fi novels I've read. ^.^ You are well on your way to becomming a published author. In my eyes at least. :D May I beg for an update? Soon? *gives you a buffalo wing* Please?

~360~

OMG! Thank you very very much for rewriting this story. I love Mood Music so much. It's one of my most favorite stories and certainly one of the most unforgettable stories that I've ever read. I hope you will continue writing this to the end because I'm really, really curious about what will happened to them and the killer that appeared in the last chapters.