 Nolonegrusedaccount 2008-08-10 . chapter 4And now...I am interested! I love this story (girl-on-girl...lovely!!), but I am still awaiting Makoto's reaction to, well...you know!
I really can't say much about what I've just read, although the few paragraphs at the end don't exactly help matters (not too say, that they were bad!), but I'll survive.
Good job. All I can say!
See ya! |
 Nolonegrusedaccount 2008-08-08 . chapter 3Poor, poor Belle...I just wanna cuddle her, she's suffered so much! I'm glad that I can say such a thing, as that means that your characters are perhaps some of the best I've seen in a long while, and I'll admit that I've seen alot of characters that I thought were life-like and cuddle-worthy.
Yours, however, are tops. Plain and simple, no denying it!
I wonder whether Makoto will ever find out? And whether he'll freak out if he does?
Well, I know I've said this for all of my last reviews, but I will say it again; This story is one of the best I've read.
See ya!
Ukitsu |
 Nolonegrusedaccount 2008-08-08 . chapter 2Oh god! Belle's innocence is just grand! But I just can't help thinking of Isumi from Hayate The Combat Butler when I think of Belle's curosity and innocent way of exploring.
Her reaction to Raine's mistake was great, too! (Poor dear, although it's kind of nice and unusual, seeing what should be a horrific monster getting frightened so easily by a mere mistake like Raine's...)
I will definetly continue reading this story, as I have officially dubbed it the most original thing I've read in a while on this dang site!
See ya, and keep on writing!
Ukitsu |
 Nolonegrusedaccount 2008-08-08 . chapter 1Okay, before I review, I'll admit I'm a sucker for Yuri...so yeah, you've pretty much guaranteed yourself a fan from the get-go.
However, despite that, I must bring something up; Gun rights in Japan aren't the same as in other countries and, unless I'm mistaken you cannot own handguns inside the country.
Mind you, I may be thinking of another country, but besides the U.K and Russia, Japan is the only other strict anti-gun group on this planet. Just thought I should bring that up, and find out whether the gun was legit or not? (sorry for being nit-picky)
Anyways, I'm kind of glad I checked this story out, and I wonder why there aren't as many reviews for it seeing as this is an interesting idea(okay, the yuri side really helps in that regard. I'm a male, so sue me!)...but maybe that's the problem, as most people like the tried and true compared to the new, or different!
Well, I hope to read more of this story, and that you do not let such an idea die!
See ya!
Ukitsu |
 Nabolion 2008-07-02 . chapter 1Great work! I like this story. Keep up the good work and update soon.
Help your self by reading some of my works. |
 HellowYell 2008-02-09 . chapter 5I like this. Mixin' it up. Are ya still gonna have Makoto blind?? LOL
Update soon please. :D |
 Renica of the blue wind 2008-02-07 . chapter 5Rar! I refuse to believe you have only one review! It must be a crime!
Anywho, I love your story. And I never read yuri! Ha ha!
I was intrigued by your title. The kuchisake onna greatly interests me, but I can't stomach horror movies and such, so I was worried that I wouldn't be able to find anything about her that I could read.
I love your story, Raine is a great character, and Belle is so cute and adorable!
Plus, I love the Beauty and the Beast thing. That's my second favorite disney movie!
The details in your story are gorgeous.
Have I told you Belle is cute? I just love her!
I hope you update soon! |
 HellowYell 2008-01-21 . chapter 4I like this.
Continue soon?? |
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