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| Kar-zid 2008-05-30 ch 5,   | Aw, Alex was gonna ask her to marry him. What a shame he died. Great chapter by the way, and CREA sort of reminds me of the android in Ghost In The Shell. Keep updating, I need to find out what happens now! ^_^ |
| Kar-zid 2008-03-17 ch 4, | Awesome chapter! I liked how you did Reiji's suicide, your writing is awesome! Update soon! |
| Kar-zid 2008-03-15 ch 3, | Awesome chapter, I wonder what's out there... The $500 vodka thing is quite possible, in 1980 (according to IT anyway) it only cost 3 quarters for a double feature movie and popcorn. Now it costs $10. |
| Napris 2008-03-14 ch 2, | Really impressive story! I have yet to find things I can critique you on, too! :O I think that REALLY impressive... You used great descriptions, and I can almost see everything that's going on. You describe the things that we as readers require in order to picture a story correctly. I'm very interested in what happens to the android whose internal data was supposedly 'destroyed beyond repair.' In your summary it sounds as if something went wrong... or partially wrong. -shrugs- :D My English teacher is very much in love with Sci-Fi, whereas I was more into fantasy. She's been displaying a lot of science fiction literary and cinematic works recently, to introduce us to her passion for Crichton works. xD IE: Ray Bradbury, Isaac Asimov, and "Lost in Space"(the more recent version). So I guess I'm really clear about the line between science fiction and fantasy now. I suppose your storie's dominated by sci-fi, mostly. It's really good... I'm also interested in the 'daemons.' I think I'm just waiting for you to present confirmation on whether this is an 'end-of-the-world-potential-threat-sci-fi-adventure," or if it's something else. :D Keep up the great work! You're writing the BEST fictionpress story I've read in the past ... MONTH, I think. :O Good job! Can't wait for next update! :] |
| Kar-zid 2008-03-10 ch 2, | Awesome chapter, it sounds like the citizens can't do anything fun! Update soon! ^_^ |
| Dani Hoyt 2008-03-02 ch 1, | This chapter shows a lot of potential. Please add more, I'm dying to learn more about your mysterious characters. |
| Kar-zid 2008-01-18 ch 1, | Very interesting, I can't wait to find out what other cool features the robot has! Keep up the good work, your a great writer! |
| xAlRoChanx 2008-01-13 ch 1, | Wow, this is interesting. Keep updating! (And will you also read my fic? Give critiques about it, please! It's called Destiny, and it's also in the Manga section) Your writing style is really good, I love it! |