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| PunK.cHEw.AsIAn 2008-02-19 ch 1, | This is cute lol. I have to favorite it |
| kristen fowler 2008-02-16 ch 1, | Well, since you insist. I immensely enjoyed this one as well. ;) |
| Oh-hum 2008-01-18 ch 1, | I really loved this one, it was extravgantly amazing. I really must say you are a wonderful arist. |
| readyforpeace 2008-01-13 ch 1, | I agree, I like the ending too. The poem kinda sounds like your asking a lot from a perfect stranger, but you not because the definition of a perfect stranger is up to you. Just one question why is "trickle" on two separate lines? My favorite line is "half my meal donated to my workaholic monday eyes" there is so much in that single line; its packed with meaning. Very well done. Keep it up :) |
| Sonora the free 2008-01-13 ch 1, | I like the way you ended it, the whole starbucks thing. Kinda funny... |