"Except they weren’t dead. For nearly thirty years Jack believed the lie told to him on his third birthday by the old man and woman when they explained why he should not be calling them mama and papa."

This seems to be worded kind of funny. It seems like you're trying to cram too much information into one sentence.
(something that you seem to do a lot in your stories)

Children don't just call random people mama and papa, you have to teach your kids what to call you. They repeat what they hear. If they don't hear mama and papa, they won't say it. (I'm sure you know that, you have kids. But the way it was worded made it sound otherwise)

Also I was confused at how you were trying to say it was thirty years later. It was just very sudden, I suppose.

Just some things I noticed, thought you'd like to know.

Love your stories, they need some work but over all way better than anything I could write.

Peace.

Okay, so this was my favourite book in the series. It was a good ol' action/adventure ride, with tons of romance thrown in, and fantastic characters.

I loved the emotional turmoil of the main characters in the book. Jack Barnes was incredible, and the way you portrayed the feelings of loss, betrayal and being in limbo and having an identity crisis was just magnificent. Meg as well, from her feelings of inadequacy as a mother to her feelings about herself and the amethyst. It was just so incredibly poignant, and the way the two just fell in love... ah, perfect. The romance was just perfect in this one. Brynna is one of my favourite characters and we really got to know more about her in this one, which I really enjoyed. The other characters were also wonderfully fleshed out, from Alex to Dave.

Oh, and I loved how the elusive M.M was made known in this book. Like I said in my review of Book 6, I positively shiver in excitement at these plot tie-ins and revelations.

Awesomeness to it's fullest.

Jennifer Leigh, you are my hero.

Woo! I'm on the 4th book after only starting the series 4 days ago! I absolutely LOVE these stories and ever since Jack was introduced in the first novel, I was DYING for a story about him. I had fallen in love haha. xD

Just thought I'd drop you a review, and to tell you I am reading on and will read your other series too. =]

Aw!

Yay! I'm so glad you didn't make us wait, cuz that was HOT!

Jack and Alex are so lovable and cute. It was good to read about the true nature of Jack and his story. Bless him he deserved a happy ending. =D
Your stories are very addictive, it's hard to stop. Im off to start the laporia story.

hiya

this book was great. the character were clear and came through strong but for some reason i found this book not as good as the others. It was good don't get me wrong just the others were better.

Can't wait to read the next one.

Angel

Yet again, absolutely amazing, i really loved this one because Barnes was such an amazing character that deserved happiness and it was great seing him develop into something different. I'm liking the idea of doing it about Laporia, seeing as we don't know much about him yet and it will be cute to see Raya open him up.

I have to agree with one of your other reviewers on Book 3, your characters are great, and just flawed enough to make them human :)

Thanks for another great read! Now on to Book 5! :)

Another Fantastic story! I'm running out of compliments for your work, so I'm just going to leave it at a beautifully imaginative and put together story.

I'm stupid, so I forgot to say this when her drawing hobby was first mentioned, but Meg is the M.M. whose drawings Aillin bought! :) I'm guessing, but I'm pretty sure that I'm right. (I'm sorry, but I prbably spelled Aillin wrong...and the grammar sucks in this review, but i'm too lazy to fix it :) )

The end of this chapter is a little confusing. I'm not entirely sure why she is crying and her heart is broken. I assume it has something to do with the necklace. Is it supposed to be obvious why she is upset, or are we supposed to be confused and have to read further to find out? I guess whatever was intended for the end of this chapter a more in-depth explanation will be coming.

But nice work so far. :)

I love Alex. He's so CUTE! While still being a rather complex character for a kid.

As usual, I loved the book. I gave you some more detailed stuff earlier, and I can't think of any outstanding criticism lurking around in my head. . . .

Can't wait to go read about Ryaden and Raya! That will be most definitely interesting. On to Book 5.

*gasp*

NO!

I was just going to write in this review about how much I love him! Oh. My. God. That is just cruel.

Before I'm torn away to keep reading in blind hope, during the listing of charges, you say, "one of the most respected and talented Artisan’s in the province". Ahem. It's plural, not possessive.

Okay, back to my hopeless optimism. :'-(