I agree - people who don't like stuff like this shouldn't read it. Let alone comment on it.
I personally am past my emo phase and therefore didn't like this story very much, but that's just my style.
But I don't go out saying bad stuff about people's stories, EVEN if I didn't like them. OK?
Oh, and although I personally thought it wasn't realistic, it's VERY WELL WRITTEN - thank God, no grammar mistakes! You're a good writer.
Sorry if I offended you with the criticism - totally not my intention to offend anyone!

Hello imjlotherealone, that comment is realy negative. Michael put a lot of effort into it, and what does he get?
Some weiro saying that it's the perfect introduction to a shity gay **. You should be ashamed of yourself. How would you like it, if you put a story on FP and someone slated it, like you slated Michael's?
Yeah, think about that, EH?
Think next time before you slate anyone's work.
They put a lot of effort into these stories you know. And Michael would appreciate some help, not the gay ** that came out of your mind.
Chris.
ps. don't listen to imjlotherealone, they're just jealous. Your story is excellent.

Sounds like the perfect introduction to a ** gay **.