Reviews for The Right Kind of Treason

Reviews For: The Right Kind of Treason - Reviews: Page 1 of 9

Qwerty007 2008-06-11 ch 61,	abuseWow... it took me three days but I'm so glad I read this! Your ability at storytelling is absolutely amazing. I can tell you put a lot of time into it by the historical context and also your careful use of the Russian and German languages. Great work! On to the sequel!
fictionluvr 2008-04-01 ch 61,	abuseThanks for an interesting story. I admire anyone who can write such a long story. Its so much harder than I realized! I love war stories. I read the whole thing which I don't do with most of the stories on FP. There were a few things I could have done without like cursing and sex before marriage, but you did post it under T. I thought your main characters were developed very well. I was SO SAD when Stefan died. :( Definitely going to read the sequel.
Lanayaj 2008-02-19 ch 61,	abuseTHINGS I LOVED: The characters. I loved Bianca and Stefan and Nikoli, especially them. Some of the others, I feel, were a bit too flat for the roles they played, like Heinrich and her mother, but the uncle and sister and such were fantastically done. Last couple chapters. Such extreme detail and emotion and passion went into them, I felt they could be a whole seperate story from the whole. The setting. Loved where it was and how well you pulled off the era. THINGS THAT DIDNT DO SO HOT FOR ME: The slang you used. I don't think they had OK and such in their time, and so I think if you changed that (And it would be hard, I know) it would awesome. As I said, some of the characters were too flat for me; some could use just a little more personality, even for the parts they played. Amazing story, all around. Definitely staying on the favourite list. Heiress
Lanayaj 2008-02-18 ch 57,	abuseOH yay more of it! And now I have to quit, because my turn is up, but wow, expect me back, Im coming back for more! YAY! Lana
LeenaElle 2008-02-18 ch 60,	abuseOh goodness...so adorable, five years, it took her five years?! What is she nuts! I like that she had her nephew with her, I'm wondering what happened to Francie. Of course, I'm wondering about everyone, Francie, Ludovick, Leisle, everyone! I also wonder if Nick knew about Stefan...if he did, he should have gone back for Bianca, if he didn't, Bianca should have told him in this chapter...just my personal opinion...sorry. Ok, so Love love love you story!! Such a good job, great ending, very emotional!! Bravo!
LeenaElle 2008-02-18 ch 59,	abuseOh my gosh! What a powerful little chapter, got me choked up! I am so sad for her! So so so sad for her! Wonderfully written, very passionate and feeling. Almost done!
LeenaElle 2008-02-18 ch 58,	abuseStefan! Ah! My hero, well not mine, but Bianca's. You did it, I can't believe you did it...well I can, but still, you did it! He's gone! So cruel, if they could have just held on... just two more days and they would have been safe :( I'm so sad for him, so sad for her, and for the baby I know she's carrying. Reading on!! This is excellent!
LeenaElle 2008-02-18 ch 57,	abuseA sick feeling is rising within me...what did Stefan do...what did Stefan do! Ahh, so enjoying the end. Really wish I could have read them sooner, but at the same time, reading the end all in one straight shot is AWESOME! Moving on...
LeenaElle 2008-02-18 ch 56,	abuseBIANCA! NO Ah I'm freaking out! Short chapter, but it said A LOT! Moving on, sorry for the short reviews, but I can't wait!
LeenaElle 2008-02-18 ch 55,	abuseOk, so my fictionpress wouldn't work for like an hour, so weird, and obnoxious! So anyway! I'm so nervous for Nick, so this is going to be a short review...Also, don't really know what she said at the end of the chapter...I know it means I love...but I don't know the second two words :( Maybe I'll find out in the next chapter? I hope! Alright, ps...Nick is gaining mega points in my book...fyi.
LeenaElle 2008-02-18 ch 54,	abuseAh! Craziness, poor Ludovick! I feel so bad for him, he's so cute, and it's so sad how his memory just clouds up after what seems to be no time at all. I'm on the edge of my seat! Moving on!
LeenaElle 2008-02-18 ch 53,	abuseA million apologies! I am so sorry that I'm retarted! I have been thinking for a while now, what happened with The Right Kind of Treason, I haven't seen an update in forever, I wonder what she's doing... Then, today, I had a little free time and checked your authors page and saw...61 chapters, what! I know I wasn't up to 61. Then I checked my alerts, and you weren't there, and checked my review history, and you still weren't there, and I was so confused! Now, I read this chapter, and your note, and...I felt like a jerk because I should have checked sooner! I'm so sorry, you should have said something, gosh I've been going through withdraw! Ok, with that out of the way, this chapter...It was short, not much going on, but I liked it still, and I love that Bianca's pregnant, or else that's what I'm thinking, and I also liked the way you explained her having the name she does. Though, I didn't realize that Ludovic and Francie were only half siblings...Maybe I did and it's just been a while. Ok, on to the next chapter, I'm going to try to catch all the way up...not sure that I can tonight though :( Gonna try!
Wolf bathed in Star-light 2008-02-17 ch 61,	abusehow rude. pouts you didn't even mention that i forced you into writing this.
IheartStewart20 2008-02-12 ch 60,	abuseAw! That's so great that they found each other again! This was SUCH a great story! Absolutely loved it!
Clarelouise 2008-02-12 ch 60,	abuseyay this was such a gd ending! its really good the way youve ended it on a high, as it could have been quite depressing because of the last chapter. but i love it! the way you described biancas clothes especially was so detailed and beautifully written, and i really think u should paint the picture of bianca! poo miss donalds ideas it would be so cool! i can imagine it so clearly with the intricate wings that he added in, and the way it shows how much nikoli loves her. also its really cool the way u brought in her nephew, stupid francie for not looking after him properly but im sure bianca is a much better mum for him! overall though, CONGRATULATIONS! this was suuch a great story and im so proud of you for persisting and keeping the quality up throughout it, its an amazing achievement! cant wait for the 'musings', but i gotta go to my stupid violin lesson sigh... well done!! x

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