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| spiderfly 2008-07-17 ch 1,   | Um... interesting. Thought-provoking. I'd say this was a little bit too much like prose to be considered a poem, exactly - it's basically complex sentences that don't reach the end of the page, that's all. But I really like the idea here. |
| HGiel 2008-04-22 ch 1, | Good story, and an interesting concept. It would be an interesting challenge to see what more people would write with the subject of War Child. |
| bandaid01 2008-03-03 ch 1, | I like it. Good job! :D |
| D.E. Sinatra 2008-02-27 ch 1, | Interesting story here. But it really makes me laugh to think back to how many teachers in high school don't give a ** about plagiarism. But moving on...I think the war child is perhaps a person of our generation who has grown up with wars around them or something. Lol, I really have no idea, and I'm probably not right, but I certainly would like to know who you meant when you referred to the "War child". |