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loversdream17
2008-01-16
ch 1,
great job with the use of the topic for i really enjoyed it. but the only problem i had with it is that i felt when i got to the end that you could have explored it a little more with a couple more lines or something, but great job. I loved it.
Mandi~4~life
HollyBlair
2008-01-13
ch 1,
That was really good. I hope everything works out between you two.
readyforpeace
2008-01-13
ch 1,
this is a good poem, i can imagine it being read out-loud in a calm voice, not desperate or angry. I like the tone very much and the length is refreshing. Keep it up :)
ps. I wish things could be fixed as easily as this poem suggests.
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