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| loversdream17 2008-01-16 ch 1, | great job with the use of the topic for i really enjoyed it. but the only problem i had with it is that i felt when i got to the end that you could have explored it a little more with a couple more lines or something, but great job. I loved it. Mandi~4~life |
| HollyBlair 2008-01-13 ch 1, | That was really good. I hope everything works out between you two. |
| readyforpeace 2008-01-13 ch 1, | this is a good poem, i can imagine it being read out-loud in a calm voice, not desperate or angry. I like the tone very much and the length is refreshing. Keep it up :) ps. I wish things could be fixed as easily as this poem suggests. |