 empathic life 2008-02-24 . chapter 1Funny and quirky and rather sardonic. You sound so bitter about all our country's issues... It's amusing. Anyway. I like the speech-y feel to the thing, and the way you presented issues in both an amusing and serious way... If that makes sense. Yes. Yours, e.l. |
 Holly Rose E 2008-01-25 . chapter 1So... one of my biggest pleasure is reading a very satirical, almost biting, take on politics. And --blisfully, sweetly -- i chuckled all the way through.
"i do NOT start affairs with prostitues in bathrooms".
In short, a favorite.
I particularly like your line breaks, it rolls off my tongue so much easier, m. |
 burning in effigy 2008-01-21 . chapter 1the last two stanzas made me smile a little.. especially the last line
interesting perspective; it does seem that people are blowing many things out of proportion :-/ |
 WyrdWolf 2008-01-19 . chapter 1That is glorious! So in withthe times and so true; politics never change, just the issues do. Well said, very well said. Perfect format and tone for this subject.
Wolfie |
 Moondog Dozier 2008-01-15 . chapter 1Satirical, and funny look at how things get so farflung when it comes to political rhetoric. Sadly, for the most part this could be true. Well written and humorous. Good work. MD:77. |