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| Qzz 2008-05-06 ch 9,  | abuseIt's not so sad. at least he didn't disappear forever. I really loved the way you described the swings. these stories never fail to leave me feeling quiet and happy. keep writing! |
| kia 2008-05-04 ch 9, anon. | abusewhoops, i accidently reviewed your chapter using your account on your own story when you forgot to sign off of my computer last time!! i logged off afterwards tho... don't worry. didn't do anything besides not relizing in time and reviewing under your pen name. sorry |
| Sayacinari 2008-05-04 ch 9, | abusei love swings! and its interesting how the two of them always met there. like their romantic spot or something. :) |
| MySunshine 2008-05-04 ch 9, | abuseyou disappoint me ;) where did the happy, cute stories go? you should change the title if you're going to continue with such gloomy stories xD and i'm feeling sad again. and kinda disappointed. because i hate cliff-hangers, or open endings. but the story - although sad - was kinda cute. especially the relationship between nara and bryce. and how they keep meeting at the swings ^^ why did he move away anyways? he should have at least given her his address or something -.- stupid guy. i sincerely hope that it's him at the end of the chapter, sitting on the swing. i wished you'd continued ... wouldn't you like to continue this story just for me? xD anyways, as i already said, a very nice 'story'. hope you continue with the cute ones, though ^^ |
| cyanidecandy 2008-05-02 ch 9, | abusecute one-shots :) really adorable and romantic ! hope u can keep updating. |
| Qzz 2008-05-01 ch 8, | abuseI really liked this, even though it was sad, and it made my eyes water... really well written, it made me feel like I could completely feel how she was feeling. that's the beauty of this story. keep writing! |
| shadow23 2008-04-28 ch 8, anon. | abusei really enjoyed it. moving would be the word. |
| MySunshine 2008-04-28 ch 8, | abusehow sad and depressing ... i want to cry now T.T i feel so sorry for ellie. having a twin sister who's dating the guy ellie loves ... what i always asked myself (it doesn't really have anything to go with the story, but with twins ...): wouldn't it be weird if a guy first fell in love with one girl and then loved the other twin? o.0 i don't know. i'm feeling depressed xD awesome story, even though it was really sad. |
| Sayacinari 2008-04-25 ch 1, | abusetesting |
| Bella Ride 2008-04-25 ch 8, | abuseThis was a good chapter, but ive read it before. I don't remeber where i have seen this before but i don't think that it was from you. If you could please write back to me and straighten this out, i'm sure there is a perfectly logical explanation. |
| demented cookies 2008-04-21 ch 8, | abuseaww...this one was sad...:( i got a lump in my throat. gosh, you're so good at describing stuff. you're an awesome writer. |
| shadow23 2008-04-21 ch 7, anon. | abusecute! |
| Qzz 2008-04-16 ch 7, | abusemakes me smile... i have a friend who is totally clueless like that, doesn't notice that this one guy is totally smitten with her... yeah... great chapter, update soon! |
| cRavingsAniTy 2008-04-12 ch 7, | abuseAs disgusting and puke-ifying this is, I died. xD Lol. |
| MySunshine 2008-04-12 ch 7, | abusemy second favorite ^^ this was so cute and funny as well i especially liked the part where he says that she can be blind sometimes and she doesn't get it *laughing fit* |