|
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| fatbird33 2008-02-02 ch 1, | ah good good. is this a one act play, or is there gonna be more? no matter what the answer this was very well written. within a short tiem you greatly showed the characters personalities and the nature of their realtionship, which is hard to do. bravo! |
| XRenderS 2008-01-14 ch 1, | thats really good so far I like the part where he says "the first time we had sex he cried" thought that was funny. |
| HGiel 2008-01-14 ch 1, | I don't want to say I like your humor stuff better, because people tell me that all the time and its not a complement lol So although I like your other stuff the best, this one was good as well. It was very real and down to Earth. |