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Reviews For: The Best Laid Plans

fatbird33
2008-02-02
ch 1,
ah good good. is this a one act play, or is there gonna be more? no matter what the answer this was very well written. within a short tiem you greatly showed the characters personalities and the nature of their realtionship, which is hard to do. bravo!
XRenderS
2008-01-14
ch 1,
thats really good so far I like the part where he says "the first time we had sex he cried" thought that was funny.
HGiel
2008-01-14
ch 1,
I don't want to say I like your humor stuff better, because people tell me that all the time and its not a complement lol So although I like your other stuff the best, this one was good as well. It was very real and down to Earth.
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